Richard Vanek - Black and White Photography

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Sunday, 25th May, 2008

When less is more
[posted at 19:03 GMT]    

My friend J. send me another image and asked me for opinion. With her permission I am including my answer here, with hope it can be useful to some more. Later I may extend this article by adding some tips and examples.

Looking at your image apart from fixing dark part (look at attached image), there is not much from technical point of view to make better.

Nice is how tree and stones in foreground frame the hills on horizon.

However there is one fundamental problem with this image. That problem is very common and it is one of the most difficult to fix.

It is about how our brain works when looking and the scene. Our brain filter automatically unimportant things from the scene and place emphasis on the items in scene which we find important.

Photo camera is not able to do it. So when we take picture of something we find interesting, later by looking at the print we realize that there are too many things and a lot of them is disturbing. We find out that the one or few items important to us are lost in the image. Other people looking at the same image do not know why we took image. They do not know what we saw important on that image.

So art of making good image is to filter out at the time of exposure what is important and what is not by making the right composition.

We can make it partially later by darkening and lightening of part of image to put focus on important thing.

On your image however I have no idea what was the important thing why you took this image. There is too many things. Stones on left part of the image, hills at the horizon.

So I can not use darkening and lightening technique to make change which would put focus on one or very few items with the most important in image.

Some images do not have focus point, but in that case they contain extremely few objects and actually creates more poetical feeling that documentation value.